Data stories - how to combine the power storytelling with effective data visualization

DATA
STORIES
Creating compelling
stories with data
Effectively combining
Storytelling, Data
Visualisation and
business reporting
February 24, 2014
Prepared by: Miriam Gilbert
Storytelling with Numbers

Visual communication:
Data Visualisation
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Table of Contents 03
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Introduction to Business
Storytelling
What is different about
Data Storytelling
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Storytelling:
Create a narrative
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Expressiveness et al
The right tools
Drawing attention
Guidelines
Storytelling:
Examples
Appendix
End notes
Resources and
credits
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Storytelling: Create a
compelling structure
Storyboarding for
content and lay-out
©Miriam Gilbert Storytelling with Numbers

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Storytelling
in Business
What has storytelling to
do with business?
Isn’t business about hard facts and
figures? Actually, storytelling has
become big business.
Corporate storytelling has gone
mainstream in the last decade, with
leaders use storytelling techniques to
inspire staff and all self-respecting
marketers use stories when talking
about products, services and brands.
Using stories to convey a
message not a new thing.
Storytelling is one human trait
that transcends time and
culture. Examples of stories
have been found in all known
societies throughout history..
The most common focus for
storytelling in business is to
persuade, influence and
motivate an audience.
Think of a CEO standing in front of a
crowd of employees. Or a major brand
trying to entice customer to buy more
of their products. Because of that, you
find most business storytellers within
marketing, branding and sales
functions and among leadership
groups. However, with the rise of ever
more data being accessible and
digestible by organisation, a new kind
of business story teller is emerging
among data scientist, analysts and
other technical professionals. News
media businesses are already on the
case: Data Journalist has become a
recognised job description.
“Data Storyteller” also seems set to
become a common job description,
alongside data scientist . And if you
google “Master Data Storyteller” you
will find more than one company
©Miriam Gilbert Storytelling with Numbers advertising vacancies!

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How to we define
“stories” in
business?
The Oxford Dictionary
defines “story” as:
1: An account of imaginary or real
people and events told for
entertainment; 2: A report of an item
of news in a newspaper, magazine, or
broadcast; 3: An account of past
events in someone’s life or in the
development of something; 4: The
commercial prospects or
circumstances of a particular
company.
There is no single, ultimate
definition for what constitutes
a story, just many, many
opinions
Most traditional definitions of “story”
demand that a story includes a
protagonist, some kind of struggle or
conflict, dialogue and sensory
language. That would mean that
many forms of narrative do not
qualify, including for example, silent
movies and video games, even
though there is a large industry
devoted to developing storylines for
games. Based on that definition, the
place for stories in business would be
limited, and many areas of
organisations might shy away from
exploring the benefits of stories. To
define Data Stories, we therefore
adopt a more inclusive approach:
Stories are accounts of real or imaginary events that engage the
listener in interactive1 communication

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How Storytelling
works
Research in neuroscience and psychology investigates what
happens when we are exposed to stories. It’s shown that
stories have a physical, mental and emotional impact on us,
and that evolution has indeed hardwired our brains to respond
to stories differently compared with all other forms of
communication1.
Stories can make the
complex simple
Living in an increasingly complex world,
we place a lot of reliance on facts and
data. However, the numbers rarely speak
for themselves, they need expert
interpretation. Stories can provide that
interpretation by taking analysis results,
trends and scenarios off the
spreadsheets and bringing them into
the world of people. They can convey
complex relationships, provide context
and allow us to compare what we hear
to our experience – thus enabling us to
assimilate information quicker and
question more insightful those things
that don’t fit our expectations.
Stories make information
memorable
Research shows most people forget facts
and data quickly. However, people can
vividly recall stories they heard in childhood.
Studies into how our brain reacts to stories
show that stories give people an emotional
frame of reference. This makes stories
“sticky” and they provide the language to
be recalled quickly.
Stories can foster collaboration and embed values
In modern organisations, we are often part of multi-function teams and collaboration is vital to achieve the business’ goals. Using
stories can help create common ground by enabling us to share experiences and make abstract concepts tangible.

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What is different
about Data
Storytelling
Data stories combine narrative
storytelling with data in a format that
makes the data easily accessible,
generally using visualisation:
General issues with
business communication
Many traditional business reports and
presentations err on the side of detail,
resulting in lengthy documents with
dense text, tables and over-busy
graphs. Of course, executives and
meeting attendees then regularly
initiate an exercise to reduce the
paper mountain, asking for executive
summaries, highlights or exception
reports, one page briefing memos
and dashboards.
The trick here is to ensure that all the
relevant information is still present in
the shortened version and your
message comes across clearly. Too
often, the shortened version (and
sometime the long version as well)
does not answer the crucial question:
So what? What is the story?
Data stories – how they
can help
Data stories take advantage of the
power of storytelling to quickly
provide context and establish
relevance and expectations. This
enables the audience to grasp a large
quantity of facts quickly This is
combined with the power of effective
visual communication to let the
audience grasp large amounts of
information in “chunks” that help the
working memory retain information.
There is a large body of evidence
showing that the working memory is
correlated with problem solving,
learning, reasoning, and reading
comprehension – all good ingredients
for your audience to experience.

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Data Storytelling:
Definition
A method of delivering messages derived from
complex data analysis in a way that allows the
audience to quickly and easily assimilate the
material, understand its meaning and draw
conclusions from it.

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Key ingredients for
Data Storytelling - 1
A message
Without a message, you have no story. And you owe it your audience to
give them a story. A data scientists or data analysts job is partly to
assemble the data (mine, discover, unearth, aggregate) and help the rest of
the world to draw meaning from it without the audience having to
understand the hundreds of caveats, sources, transformations, etc.
necessary to get usable insights.
A poor data scientist is a number
monkey, able to use new tools to
blindly pull whatever information is
asked of him. He will be replaced by
automated tools in the next 10
years. A good data scientist does
the job of the poor one and more.
She is a critical reviewer of the data.
She develops a hypothesis based
on the data, verifies her hypotheses
by investigating similar data that
would disprove her hypotheses,
making sure she catches any
obvious mistakes.
She makes sure her audience
understands what the data suggests
and what it does NOT suggest. She
helps the audience - whether that is
the CEO, CMO, BOD, or conference
attendees - to understand that
because something is correlated,
one effect is not necessarily caused
by another, and keeps the insights
sane. At the end of the day her
analysis is successful when actions
can be taken from her insights and
she has been asked about angles
she had not yet explored.
Going beyond the data means
presenting a message – key to
effective (data) storytelling

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Key ingredients for
Data Storytelling - 2
Narrative
A narrative is any account of connected
events, presented to a reader or listener in
a sequence of written or spoken words, or
in a sequence of (moving) pictures or
acted display. It’s the tool you use to
convey your message. When it comes to
data stories, you select from a
combination of words, graphics and
potential videos (mime and dance are less
likely in a business setting).
Structure and flow
Structure is the internal framework that
holds the data story together. Flow is the
“movement” through the story; the order
in which you arrange the information and
style to present the information to your
audience.
Visual communication
A good data visualization has the ability to
show you something that you wouldn’t
have seen by only looking at the data, it
presents the data in a way that the viewer
can explore and understand it. Most
commonly, charts and graphs are used for
this purpose.

Data Visualisation
Expressiveness, precision and
accuracy
The right tools
Drawing attention
Guidelines
Visual
communication

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Data visualization
and communication
Visualisations have the power to “show” the story behind the data – and they
are nothing new. In fact, one of the best known early data stories is the
visualisation of Napoleon’s disastrous invasion of Russia in 1812 by Charles
Joseph Minard, a French engineer with a flair for “infographics”:
The flow map shows the size of Napoleon’s army at different stages of the campaign combining geography, time, temperature,
the course and direction of the army’s movement, and the number of troops remaining to tell the story of this dreadful campaign:
In 1812, the Grand Army set out from Poland with a force of 422,000; only 100,000 reached Moscow; and only 10,000 returned2.

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Data visualization
and communication
Much of the focus in data visualization
has historically been on exploring and
analysing data.
But the analysts who use visualization often are
not the decision makers, so they need to
communicate their findings to the decision
makers.
The problem is that many data visualisations
used for communication purposes are bad – as
simple as that. This ranges from many
infographics used for marketing purposes to
certain default graphs in excel or the outputs by
data visualisation tools where it is assumed that
the tools used for analysis are usable for
presentation just as well as for their original
purpose.
What happened to
the other 10%?
Who are the other
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What is wrong with
this chart?
Spot at least 6 flaws in this bar
chart*
*Solution in the appendix

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Expressiveness
Precision
Accuracy
Translating data into visual forms is
called visual encoding. For visual
communication to be effective in data
stories, the visualisation needs to
express the encoded data in a
meaningful way. This means not
trying to show every piece of data
under the sun but all the facts that
are relevant. Editorialising should be
done explicitly and transparently, for
example by using colour or other
focus-driving tools or with words.
Editorialising must never be done
underhand using tools such as
artificial scaling of axis, misleading
selection of source data or implying
relationships where there are none.
Precision is different from
expressiveness and it is concerned
with the level details you want to give.
A simple example of precision is the
number of decimal point displayed in
a table. Depending on the needs of
the audience, you might opt for more
or less decimal points.
Accuracy is again different from
both expressiveness and precision.
The relationship between accuracy
and precision is particularly
important, as sometimes greater
precision is associated with accuracy,
even when this relationship does not
exist. An example of the difference is
this:
Imagine you are running a charity
tombola where participants have to
guess the value of copper coins in a
jar. One participant guesses the
coins total “£3,234.67” and another
guesses “about £2,000”. If the coins
come to £2,054, then the first guess
is the more precise one but the
second the more accurate one.
It goes without saying that you
should feel comfortable about the
accuracy of the data encoded,
whereas expressiveness of the level of
precision and method of encoding
depend on the circumstances.
Expressiveness tells the
story
Precision is about level
of detail
Accuracy describes
correctness

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Choosing the right
tool for the job
Tables are the right choice if the
audience wants to look up individual
values of a data set. They allow to
pick up individual points with great
precision. They can also be useful if
you want to display a very small data
set of up to 10 data points or less.
Graphs, on the other hand reveal
meaningful relationships between
the data. Using graphs enables you
to see trends, patterns and
exceptions in the underlying data
that might remain hidden if displayed
as a table.
When deciding that a graph is the
best tool to visually display your
story, you need to decide what data
relationships you want to display.
Different graphs work for different
relationship types, so consider:
Do you want to show a comparison?
A distribution? A Composition or a
relationship?
The two most common forms
to visually encode data is
with graphs and tables. Both
are excellent tools, when
chosen for the right task.

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The whole is different
to the sum of its part
Gestalt Theory: how we make
sense of what we see

Gestalt theory: how
do we make sense
of what we see
Once you have decided on your message, effective visual communication is about showing it to the audience
and this means enabling people to see it effectively .
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The presentation needs to play to the strength of visual perception and
minimising its weaknesses. In order to do this, it is necessary to
understand a bit about how visual perception works, i.e. how people see,
how their eyes work.
The eye and visual cortex have
been likened to a massive parallel
processor, feeding into the
human cognitive centres. The
strength of the human visual
system is that is an unparalleled
pattern detector but it works to
its own rules. If the patterns are
presented in one way, we can
easily see them but in another
way, we cannot3.
There is extensive research into
what the rules of perception and
cognition are, going all the way
back to the work by the
Berliner Schule der
Gestaltpsychologie
(Berlin School of Gestalt
psychology), established in the
early 20th Century.
Gestalt means “form”, “patterns”
or “shape”. The Gestalt theory
stipulates that the whole is
different to the sum of its parts
(NOT more), and that perception
is not built up from stimuli
sensation (i.e. light from an object
entering the eye) but is a result of
perceptual organisation.
How does this relate to Data
Storytelling?
Data stories, by their very definition, include data and
visuals. Using the principles of Gestalt theory helps
choosing the most appropriate design for these
visuals, and avoid confusing mistakes. For example,
not visually grouping unrelated items or visually
connecting items where there is no real connection
All of this allows us to identify what we really need
when we communicate data - and remove the clutter!
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. To explain the phenomenon of perceptual organisation, Gestalt theory established a number of “principles
of perception”. Key ones are:
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Making sense of
what we see …
Pragnanz
Simple patterns are
noticed before other,
more complex ones.
Visual perception
reduces patterns to the
simplest possible
structure, searching for
pithiness
Continuation and
closure
Points, when connected,
result in contours. These
contours follow the
smoothest path and
even trick the eye into
perceiving things that
are not there. This
includes “completing” a
figure, even if parts are
missing.
Applying these principles in business report
might look like this:

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Making sense of
what we see … (cont).
Common region
Elements grouped
together in a region are
perceived to belong
together
Connectedness
A connected region of
visual properties is
perceived as a single
unit
Common fate & Synchronicity
Elements that move together or change together
(e.g. blinking lights) are perceived to belong
together.
Applying these principles in business report
might look like this:

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Making sense of
Meaningfulness and familiarity
Visual elements are more likely to be perceived as
groups if the groups appear meaningful or
familiar.
The bottom data chart plays on the concept of
familiarity. As the colour RED is associated with
something bad (in many cultures), it draws
attention to the months with poor performance.

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Making sense of
Similarity
Elements that are visually similar, appear grouped together.
Proximity
Elements that are visually
grouped together are
perceived as belonging
together
Combining the principles of
proximity and similarity

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Pre-attentive
Attributes

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Some elements
command more
attention than
others:
Proximity vs. Similarity:
Which one wins?
Pre-attentive attributes
Research into how the human visual system analyses images
discovered a limited set of visual properties that are detected very
rapidly and accurately by low-level visual system. These are
properties are deemed to have pre-attentive
attributes.
This is important for design of visualizations as it lets us
understand:
 what can be perceived immediately
 what properties are good discriminators
 what can mislead viewers
Knowing this, we can guide attention to the key points in our
story.
How many fives can
you spot quickly?

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Grabbing attention
There are a total of 12 types of
pre-attentive attributes. We can
use a combination of our
understanding of Gestalt
principles and strategically
placed pre-attentive attributes
to direct our readers attention
without taking away any
essential information.
Line length Line width Orientation Shape
2D position Size Additions Enclosure
Intensity Hue
Blinking
Flicker
Direction
Curvature /
form
Motion
Only some pre-attentive
attributes are perceived
quantitative. 2D position and
Line length are the strongest,
though Line width, Size and
Intensity have limited pre-attentive
quantitative qualities

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Pre-attentive
attributes applied
Intensity and hue can draw attention but on their own they need a
definition to become meaningful, e.g. traffic light designation of red as
“bad” (which itself needs clear definition).
Fairly accurate perception: We can
perceive relatively small differences in position or
line length and get a “feel” for the difference.
Limited accuracy in perception: small differences are much
harder to perceive when it comes to angles, slopes and areas.

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Pre-attentive
attributes are not
limited to graphs
Good Data storytelling contain text as well as graphs and
tables, so we can use pre-attentive features to highlight
specific sections, make larger chunks of text more digest-able
and direct attention
Bigger elements
like letters,
numbers and
objects stand out
more than smaller
ones.
Slanted words,
letters and
number stand out
from those with
regular
orientation.
Making the lines
of elements like
letters and
numbers thicker
lets them stand
out more.
Choosing a
different font
changes the shape
and lets elements
like letters and
numbers stand out
from others.
Adding or
enclosing letters,
numbers and
objects lets them
stand out from
those that are not.
Changing the hue
(colour) or
intensity of letters
and numbers
makes them stand
out.
But avoid the Ransom Note effect

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
Combine the principles of Gestalt theory, pre-attentive
attributes and generally accepted graphic design principles
#1
Only display information
that is relevant to your
message.
Of course, you must include all information that
is relevant to the case in point – never (!)
exclude information simply because it doesn’t
fit your message . If there is such information,
you might have to rethink your argument.
However, many charts (aided by the excesses of
Excel) include superfluous information –
background pictures, numerous colours, 3D
effects, excessive gridlines or labels.
Edward Tufte calls this chart junk and the
aim is to increase the data:ink ratio ( the
proportion of Ink (or pixels) that is used to
present actual data compared to the total
amount of ink used in the entire display).

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#2
Visual differences are
perceived as actual
differences in the data or
underlying message
That means differences in colour for example
should have some meaning to be effective
communication tools – rainbow coloured charts
like this one could imply a link between e.g. the
yellow tinted months, even though no such link
exists.
Therefore limit the use of visual differences to
those points that you want to highlights are
part of your story.

Bar charts must start at zero to represent data
faithfully
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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#3
Display visual differences in proportion
to the actual differences in the
underlying data
People perceive differences in the lengths or 2-D locations of
objects fairly accurately and interpret them as differences in the
actual values that they represent. The most common area where
this is an issue is when bar charts don’t cross at zero.
Compare the monthly differences in these two graphs:
The data is the same but the graph on the right seems to say sales in Mar are almost double that of Jan, which is untrue. The
reason is that we cannot help noticing the length of a bar, hence bar charts must always start at zero.

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#4
Visually connecting values
are perceived to imply a
direct relationship in the
underlying value
When we connect data point, e.g. in a line
chart, the viewer interprets the data to have
some form of intrinsic relationship, even if the
data really only is only nominally related.
In those cases, chose a bar charts instead of
connecting lines.

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#5 guide people’s attention
by making some visual
elements more salient
Letting some visual elements “stand out”
drives the viewer’s attention and they will
see those elements as more important than
others.
As we have seen in the section on pre-attentive
attributes, there are number of
ways we can achieve this effect, colour just
being one simple method.

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#6
Help your brain to process information
by combining multiple facts into a
single visual pattern
Holding information in the working memory is essential to
processing the information. Research has shown that the brain
can only hold about 4 chunks of information at any given time
in the working memory.
Combining (also called chunking in psychology) several data
points in a visual pattern assist the brain to retain more
information in one go and process it accordingly. The graph is a
good example of chunking.
Making sure that all the relevant information is available within
easy eye-span is another aspect of chunking. Remember how
annoying it is if a report has related information on separate
pages and you have to keep flipping backwards and forwards?

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#7
Just because some tools
are popular that does not
make them useful
There are at least five reasons why the
ever popular pie chart (and their cousins,
doughnut and gauges) are often not a
good choice when it comes to visually
displaying data, regardless what the
media tells you.
Pie charts imply that the
components they show sum up to
the whole. They say that if you add
all the slices, you get 100% of
whatever you are trying to measure.
This might not be correct as shown
in this pie because it misses out on
quite a number of other social
media channels.
Just like the slices of a pie chart
must represent a whole, they also
have to be mutually exclusive. As
soon as values can fall into more
than one category, for example
when it comes to expressing
preferences, a pie chart is not the
right tool.
A common problem with pie charts
is that they cannot show more than
a few categories and remain
effective. While they can work for
up to 4 categories, anything more
than you are ending up with a
pretty pattern, but no real
discernable information.

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#7 (cont)…
if in doubt, stay off the pies
Under most circumstances, pies are hard to read.
It’s because we are not very good at judging
angles other than 90°, 180° and 270°. It makes it
difficult to compare the relative size of slices–
and when comparing different pie charts it is
almost impossible to draw sensible conclusions.
Things get even worse when visual distortions
are applied to pretty-fy the charts to make them
more “interesting”.
Particular culprits are the infamous 3D effect and
the exploding pie. When faced with these kind of
charts, you will find that most people will simply
focus on the numbers, trying their best to ignore
the actual chart – make the whole visualization
pretty pointless
How helpful are these two charts?
Sales 2012
1st Qtr 2nd Qtr 3rd Qtr 4th Qtr
Sales 2013
1st Qtr 2nd Qtr 3rd Qtr 4th Qtr

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Guidelines for
effective visual
communication
#8 Crowding too many visual
elements into one space
reduces the visual impact of
all elements
White space is the space that exists,
most frequently behind and around
forms, in a work of art, graphic
design or other form of visual
communication.
The term white space derives from
the newspaper and magazine print
industry. Historically, resources like
paper were scarce and printing was
expensive, and publishers tried to
pack as much information on every
page. It was only in the early 1900’s
that white space was “officially”
recognised and important design
element.
The biggest mistake most people
make is seeing white space as
something that must be filled in—as
something that is wasted unless it is
occupied with more elements. But
white space makes the positive
elements of a visual communication
design stand out and avoids clutter
The intentional use of space does
not just lead to better aesthetic
qualities; it’s a powerful tool for
directing the eye. White space, then,
is absolutely crucial for obtaining
clarity in your message.

Storytelling
Narrative
Story structure
Storyboarding content and
layout
Telling your story

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Create a narrative
around your
message
Presenting data – even as visualisation – is not
enough.
Consider how to build a story around your core message. Building a
narrative includes answering the “how?”, the “why?” and the often missed
“so what?” (some traditional storytelling would also ask “who”, though
this might not be the case for business reports.
This does not only convey a lot of information in a short space and make
complex insights accessible, but a solid narrative can create order and
make sense of a lot of information – and set the direction for further
investigation
When it comes to preparing to communicate with others, most of us look
at the content and say to ourselves: this is important stuff, I must tell
others…. It’s called being content led but to really engage with your
audience, turn it into an audience led one. We do that by focusing clearly
on the what you want from your audience as a result of your
communication. It’s called the Most Important Point.
So right before you start, before putting pen to paper, ask yourself these
4 questions:
• What do you want the audience to do as a result of your
presentation? (Use action verbs.)
• What does your audience need to know in order to do that?
• What does your audience need to feel in order to do that?
• Why would your audience want to do what you want them to do?
(What is in it for them?)

Of course, the content of your presentation is determined by the information you want to communicate, and your Most Important
Point. But to make sure that your message does indeed get heard about the noise, you need to tell it in a compelling manner.
Using stories, you can either wrap your whole communication into a story format (maybe tell the story of how your project has
overcome great adversity or how your business is about to embark on a brand new direction) or sprinkle some stories into your
presentations. Analogies and comparisons work well here, too.
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The most powerful
stories are about
people
In business settings, the best stories are those
that focus on real people. Yes, even a
presentation or report with lots of facts and
data is still about real people.
Finding inspiration for your story:
Specifically for numbers and data, try comparing or contrasting
the numbers with something familiar. For Example: scaling
down works by breaking the grandness of a number down
into something that everyone understands, e.g. the price of a
coffee. (e.g. the total is less than the price of just one cup a
day).
Comparing can work in a number of ways. Take Steve Job, in
his famous launch of the Macbook Air didn’t go on about the
slimness of the laptop in millimetres. Instead, all he said that it
was so thin, it fits into one of those brown envelops you see
floating around the office. Then, he took out a brown envelop
and showed how the laptop fits inside..
Putting numbers into context: is another useful tool, e.g. if
dealing with the financial impact of a project change request,
set it into context of the overall cost, or the total numbers of
change requests, depending on the point you want to make.

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Language matters
A quick word on language:
A powerful way of engaging your audience is to use Language Of The
Senses. That means telling the audience what you or the character in
your story hears, sees, smells, feels, senses and thinks. When you
trigger a sense, you bring you audience with you.
The most powerful stories appeal to at least 2 senses. Try this example:
The extraordinary project board meeting was well attended, even
though the torrential rain drumming against the window had caused a
few delays. Bob, the senior programme manager checked his papers,
the papers rustling as he shuffled his notes. The room was unusually
quiet – none of the normal small talk and banter over last night’s
football results. Bob could sense the tension in his fellow board
members and he was glad he had spent the extra time preparing for
this presentation…
‘LANGUAGE
OF
THE
SENSES

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Giving your
message some
structure makes it
memorable
Translating this to business reports means we need to provide context (aka
the beginning of the story), enable discovery (the middle) and provide
some conclusion (the end).
Although structures in business reports contain different elements
compared to story structures in creative industries, they are important none
the less. Establishing structure and flow in data stories makes sure:
 You actually get your message across,
 The sequence of information makes sense and supports your
message
 You present the right level of complexity and detail at the right
time
 Ensures you present all of the relevant information and no more
Don’t bury your message:
Make sure you highlight your key
point at the front of your story,
e.g. in the headline or graph title
Beginning End

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A beginning,
A middle, and
An end
The most basic story structure is familiar
to us all. It consists of a beginning, a
middle and an end.
The beginning (context)
To allow readers of a report to grasp its full meaning and
insights, they need to have a point of reference. That reference is
the context in which reported events took place or the
assumptions on which forecasts are based. The context could be
actual performance vs plan, this period’s performance vs prior
ones, explaining what events led to the current situation or any
other relevant background information.
The middle (discovery)
To make your message compelling, make the middle about
discovery. Explain a conflict, the hurdles that had to be overcome
and potentially the wrong turns that were taken in arriving at the
real proposed solution and call to action.
Mixing graphical representation with narrative enables you to
convey your message while still allowing your audience their own
journey of discovery. This is particularly powerful in interactive
settings but as our example shows, can be done with
conventional reports, too.
The end (conclusion)
Many business reports leave the reader with the question “so
what?”. To achieve their full purpose, effective Data Storytelling
must go beyond simple display of data but answer the so-what-question.
This means including a conclusion, recommendation,
forecast or next step suggestions. Yes, it means you have to have
an opinion and a message – and as we have seen earlier, those
aspects differentiate you from a trained monkey.

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Visual outlines via
Storyboarding
A Storyboard is simply the visual layout of how you are going
to tell your story..
Storyboards are valuable for
four reasons:
 Storyboards force you to assimilate your
information, thus causing you to clarify the
logic of your hypothesis and supporting
assertions
 Storyboards help you to focus the analysis
 A storyboard can identify gaps in your
analysis
 Storyboards prevent work that is unnecessary
or redundant (story creep)
Storyboarding for Data Stories in business reports relates two aspects:
the structure and flow of each story content in the report and the
layout of the pages of the report:.

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Five simple steps to
content storyboards:
1. For each individual story, write the core message that you
wish to convey on one post-it.
2. Then write down all the supporting points and other relevant
information you wish to include in your story on further post-its.
3. Start physically arranging your post-its to give your story
structure, checking back that it makes logical sense to an
uninitiated reader. There is no one right way – use one that
makes sense to you and your material
4. Remove any superfluous information – does the story still
make sense?
5. Check back: is your message clear and concise?
The quickest and most useful way to
storyboard is to go back to pen and
paper.
Post-its are invaluable here, though
some people prefer to write on a
whiteboard.
Central
message
Supporting
point
Supporting
point
Supporting
point
Core
message
Supporting
point
Supporting
point
Supporting
point
Conclusion
Two examples of content Storyboards

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Creating effective
layouts
Storyboarding layout and format
of the page helps avoiding
common mistakes:
Mistake #1
Placing information in places that don’t fit its
importance or does not support its use
Research shows that not all parts of a page, whether printed or on-screen are
equal when it comes to drawing attention and being perceived as important.
With this in mind, it is important to maximise on your page real-estate.
Emphasised Neutral
Neutral De-emphasised
This means you don’t want to put less important information in the top
left hand quadrant, like a company logo or a legend. Keep them for
the bottom right.
The arrows indicate the emphasis with which most people first scan
down a page, then across if the page contains written as well as other
visual elements. It’s a legacy of webpage design that has permeated
other media.

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Creating effective
layouts
Mistake #2
Including items that
serve no useful purpose
As per visual communication
guideline #1, only include elements
that are relevant. Storyboarding your
page layout will help you identifying
those that are not.
Mistake #3
Separating content
excessively
How often have you found yourself
reading a report where important
information was spread over several
pages (or separated visually on one
page), making comparisons difficult?
Storyboarding your layout lets you
plan how to keep related information
together.
Mistake #4
Failing to visually link
contents and other
items that are related
Even the best plans fail and
sometimes you cannot keep all the
relevant information in one place. In
that case, you can help the reader by
providing other clues, such as using
common colours or shapes.
Storyboarding lets you identify where
this is necessary
Mistake #5
Visually suggesting
links between contents
that are not related
This is the flip side of the point above:
make sure you don’t visually link
those items which are discrete from
another.

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Telling a story with just one graph
Background: use text to explain the context and the problem you are exploring
CHART TITLE: PRESENT YOUR STORY HEADLINE
Legend
30
Axis title
25
20
15
10
5
Details: Data source and parameters
Method
Assumptions
22
Insights: give more detail on your headlines, summarise your findings, explain your interpretations and
predidictions, help the reader to interprete your visualisation and understand the message.
Recommendations:
use text with pre-attentive attributes to highlight your message
0
Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4 Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4 Q1 Q2
Axis title
call-outs are great to highlight
trends or important points

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Telling a story with
multiple graphs
This visualisation appeared in the NY Times, 5 Dec 2009. It covered issues around emissions and other factors of climate change in
preparation for the Copenhagen climate conference (7/12 – 18/12/2009). Although the original is an interactive web-based
visualisation, these slides show how simple graphs can tell an intriguing story even in static form.
Copenhagen: Emissions, Treaties and Impacts

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Telling a story with
multiple graphs
Please note, the original visualisation
contains a wealth of additional data,
information and messages which have not
been reproduced here for brevity’s sake.
You can find the original at:
Copenhagen: Emissions, Treaties
and Impacts

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Appendix
Six flaws in the graph:
1. The value axis does not start at zero
2. Using uneven time periods
3. 3D effect
4. Excessive use of $-sign
5. X-axis description is not helpful
6. No core message / key point
End Notes:
1 Karen Dietz, Lori Silverman: Business Storytelling for Dummies, 2013, p.17
2 Michael Sandberg, Data Viz blog, datavizblog.com, 2013/05/26/
3 Colin Ware: Information Visualization: Perception for Design (Interactive Technologies), 2004, p36

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Resources
and credits
Acknowledgement:
The work in this booklet is influenced by many sources, with especial acknowledgement for the learnings from the
following:
Edward Tufte: The Visual Display of Quantitative Information, 2001
Stephen Few: Information Dashboard Design, 2013
Stephen Few: Now you see it, 2009
Colin Ware: Information Visualization: Perception for Design (Interactive Technologies), 2004
Karen Dietz, Lori Silverman: Business Storytelling for Dummies, 2013
Geni Whitehouse: How to make a boring subject interesting, 2009
Garr Reynolds: Presentation Zen Design, 2010
Randall Bolten: Painting with Numbers, 2012
Nancy Duarte: Resonate, Present visual stories that transform audiences, 2013
Icons & Images
Cave Painting by Luke Anthony Firth from The Noun Project
Other icons: The Noun Project (www.nounproject.com) under creative comments licence or the author’s own
Bev Doolittle, The forest has eyes, 1985
Copenhagen, Emissions, Treaties and Impacts: NY Times, 5 Dec 2009
Pie charts and Facebook graph: Flickr, under creative commons licence

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